A blog about adding home made lore and designing it to fit within the settings of already existent universes with a focus upon 40k. The concentration on style and design allows for its potential use within other systems as well. The goal is to improve fan-made lore and to flesh out powerful stories and characters with depth.
So I've been working on a story on my own for myself and felt that I needed some critiquing on it so I thought hey, might as well post on here. Feel free to give me feedback on what you think I did wrong, what needs fixing, any sort of constructive comments would be great. I'll take them into consideration as I continue writing and when I get to editing it. If you don't really like reading it, thats fine as well, just avoid the "Shattered Reign" posts. And without further ado: